Third Collaboration by Me and Nandita! This time it was process reversal, Idea and content were of Nandita and I simply played with few words. I hope you all would love it and dont forget to give your valuable feedbacks.
था गुमां मुझे जिन बुलंदियों पे,
झूठे उस ग़ुरूर के सन्मुख,
प्यार भरे रिश्ते, सूली चढ़ गए।
निकल आयी थी मिलों दूर,
बंधन भी सारे, पीछे छूट गए।
मैं चलती रही, अपनी धुन में
और जीवन के इस सफर में,
मुझसे मेरे वो अपने रूठ गए
अनजान अंधकारमय डगर पे,
मेरी नन्ही उंगलियों को थामे,
वो संभलकर चलना सीखा गए।
नादानियों पे आंखें तरेरकर,
वो सबल बन जीना सीखा गए।
मैं डूब गयी जरा चकाचौंध में,
और जीवन के इस सफर में,
मुझसे मेरे वो अपने रूठ गए।
दुखों के जलधि को समेटकर,
मेरी खुशियों को सहेजकर,
त्याग पे त्याग वो करते गए।
मात पिता के आश्रय बल तले,
मेरे मैं को थे झूठे पर लग गए।
मैं उड़ती रही, खयाली नभ में,
और जीवन के इस सफर में,
मुझसे मेरे वो अपने रुठ गए।
वो अनकहा प्रेम बाबुल का,
वो सौगात भरा दामन मां का
राहों को मेरे रोशन करते गए।
हठ करती रही मैं तो हमेशा,
पर वो नज़रअंदाज़ करते गए।
भटकी मैं मायावी दुनिया में,
और जीवन के इस सफ़र में,
मुझसे मेरे वो अपने रूठ गए।
अर्थ अनर्थ के समझ से परे,
जिस उन्माद के बंधन तले,
छोड़ आयी थी अपने घरौंदे को।
वो जुनून भी ठुकरा गया मुझे,
एक नई मंजिल तलाशने को।
अब पश्चाताप के गर्त में डूब,
ढूंढूं कहाँ पुराने जज्बातों को?
मनाऊं कैसे मैं अपने रूठों को?
By Nandita and Gouri
जो प्रेम लुटाये उनसे ही हम दूर हो गए,
चाहत थी कुछ पाने की,
खुद से दूर हो गए।
लाजवाब लेखन ।बेहतरीन कविता।
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Tahe dil se abhar madhusudan ji😊😊💐
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Bahut hi dard bhari rachna
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Apka abhar pratima ji.. padhne aur pasand karne ke liye
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Nice Collaboration, producing rich content to read! Congratulations to both of You.
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Thank you so much Abhay😊😊 for reading and appreciating (my X) our work.
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It should be “Our Work”. Isn’t it Nandita? Hope she is keeping an eye on your wordings..😂
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Thank you abhay for reminding of this unintentional error happened by me. Therefore I am not going to edit it sometimes sentences of gratitude remains the same and you miss out to do small changes while typing it.
And Nandita would never mind it. But anyways thanks abhay for pointing out this..
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Ary Gourav bhai, I was just kidding, please don’t feel offended. I was just trying to create humor..🙏🙏
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Thanks abhay😊! But a small typo mistake was definitely there by my side, you did it right by bringing it to my notice. Ni offence at all.
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And I do appreciate this humor part..😂😂
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Ha..ha..unearth more tressure from your thought process… more power to you!
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Definitely abhay 😊😊💐💐
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Lol…That was hilarious😂😂
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😀
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Nice collaboration sir👍👏😊
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Thank you so much shambhavi 😊😊
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Love this. ❤️
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Thank you so much akriti for reading and appreciating it.
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Amazing work Gourav sir ⭐
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Thanks a lot Nisha for going through poem and appreciating it
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Just loved it…👌👌👌
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Most welcome aditi 😊😊💐
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Awesome collaboration work done by both of you, Gouri. You both have produced deep and rich content for reading. Great post.
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Thank you so much kamal for appreciating this collaboration.😊😊💐💐
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Welcome always dear Gouri
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😊💐
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Thanks
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