आहिस्ता आहिस्ता ही सही,
हो गया हूँ मैं भी शायद,
उस फीकी कड़वी चाय का नियाज़मंद।
हुआ करती थी जो कभी,
ढलती हुयी शाम की तुम्हारी पहली पसंद।
पत्तियों से रिसते रंगों को भर,
उबलता है शायद वो भी,
जाने किस विरह वेदना में हो फिक्रमंद।
नम सफेद उड़ती भाप में,
लिए पुरानी यादों की भीनी भीनी सी सुगंध।
खाली हैं आलिन्द की कुर्शियां,
याद है वो तेरा इन झरोखों के पास बैठना,
न चाह कर भी जिन्हें अब मैं रखता हूँ बन्द।
रसोई में अब भी दुबके पड़े रहते,
तेरे मीठे खौफ से डब्बे के सारे रसीले गुड़कन्द।
नज़रों में उतर आता है बरबस,
सफेद प्यालों का वो तेरे लबों से टकराना,
और उन पे रेशमी लटों का धीरे से सरक आना।
अच्छा लगता था, तेरा वो यूँ परेशां होना,
और फिर देख मुझे, बस धीमे से मुस्कुरा भर देना।
ढहती मोहब्बत की मीनारों के,
अब कुछ भी तो नहीं रह गए अवशेष।
सांझ की थी वो एक बेवजह तकरार,
नाराज़ हो जब, उठ कर चल दिए थे तुम,
और रह गयी थी प्याली में, थोड़ी सी चाय शेष।
tea and she….well combination is too good👌
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Thank you so much kirti
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Wow you writing is sooo good. I wish main bhi likh pati apki tarah🙂
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Thank you so much vaishali.. I do have read few of your hindi posts. You also write so well.
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Thank you for your kind words 🙂
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Most welcome
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Amazing write, I like the ending so much.. I just read it twice or thrice. 😊
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Aquib bro.. thanks a lot !! So nice of you reading my work and appreciating it.
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Was my pleasure. 🙂🙂
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😊😊
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This is one of the most beautiful poem I have ever read with so intrest 💕
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Once again Thank you so much for such a nice word of appreciation
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Glad to know that you came back.Thank to her for giving you such a wonderful topic.You have written an amazing poem.Keep writing and let the sown seed of pain to grow.One day a beautiful flower will bloom.
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Thank you so much rahul!! Ya she really convinced me ..And indeed I will try my best to overcome and keep writing my wonderful stuffs.
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You just nailed it…👏👏
Chai!!! I mean never expected this coming from a topic Chai you portrayed the emotions so well and loved the way you connected all the things…
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Ha ha.. thank you aditi for whatever you chose for me. I knew you must have expected some lighter lines on tea .. but I came down heavily with emotions.
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Ya i did expected some lighter ones but as always you never leave a chance to amaze us bhaiya😁😊
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Ha ha. That do happens sometimes sister.. expectations and reality don’t match sometimes.
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Keep writing. Bahut hi khoob likha hai 👌
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Thank you so much Radhika jee
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शानदार
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Thank you friend.
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A beautiful one Gouri.
Loved it.
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Thanks priya,☺️
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For tea positive people like me.. this is soooooo beautiful.
It’s soo adorable. 🙂
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That’s true sameera !! Thank you for your kind words.
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बहुत अच्छा लिखा है सर और बहुत खुशी हुई इस सुन्दर रचना के साथ वापस wordpres पर देखकर
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Dhanyawad shambhavi. Shukriya apka.
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Good to see youu back!
This is lovelyy! :))
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Thanks a lot shruti 😊😊
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I am very sure, what you have written is beautiful, but hindi takes me a very long time to read…
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Thank you so much shalini…😊😊
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Sorry.. But I am always sure, you would write well, but my brain takes a very long time to compute and understand it.
Thank you for understanding. In the blogging world, you are only one who writes in hindi but does not get angry with me for not reading it…
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Ha ha. That was a nice compliment to me also. You know shalini ji.. many a times I tried to collaborate with such writers who are well in hindi and english both , so that if they can translate my poems in english! But so sad still haven’t found any one.
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I tried to read, by the time I got to the second paragraph, I forgot what the paragraph was…. Sorry… It is written well
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I am happy 😊😊💐💐
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Chai pe itni khatarnak poetry….💕
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Thanks a lot ravish… Haan kuch jyada hi intense ho gayi…😊😊
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Such a beautiful lines to read on my fav drink tea. Loved this one. Even I had written on tea long back, I guess that was my first attempt on daily prompt.
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Thanks a lot bhavana… Would love to read that first prompt. If you can share.
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Not so good 😷🙈
https://colourfulcanvass.blog/2017/07/27/daily-prompt-tea-a-cup-of-emotions/
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No… I would say it was a pure form of writing the essence in simple sentences..👍👍💐
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ha ha….you are really kind to say this.
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Amazing one!!
Please do check my blog too. 🙂🙂
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You haven’t written anything on your blog yet
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Please check it again! Thank you!🙂
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Dasha, even I cannot see this post, it says it doesn’t exist, see if you have linked the correct site to your name.
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Yes, there was some issue. I have fixed it now. Thanku for your response. 🙂
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Done !!👍👍
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वाह।।बेहतरीन लिखा है।
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Dhanyawad sir.. 😊
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Waah amazing..aapne to chai ko vakyi interesting bna diya.i really don’t like tea but jis hisaab se aapne likha hai lgta hai k chai mein kuch to interesting cheez hoti hogi.😊
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Tahe dil se dhanyawad apka. Haan itna to jaroor hai ki chai ke shoukeenon ke liye bina uske jindgi adhuri hai.
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Hala ki main regular nahi aati hun yahan… Phir bhi.. Jab bhi aati hun… I truely miss your writings…. Likhte rahiyega…. Bass achha lagta hai inhe padhnaa😊😊😊😊
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Thank you so much meghna!! But it would be so nice if you visit WP regularly. Aur itni tareef ke liye shukriya.😊😊
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Hey when I searched Hindi poetry then i found and i like it very much…👍👍👌👌
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Thank you so much…!!😊😊💐💐
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Wow Gourav! This Chai poem is so romantic. Perfect for tea lovers 🙂
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Thank you so much smitha ji.. glad to hear from you after so long.. and now a days I have also been irregular on WP.
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Yes me too Gourav have been irregular. Too much of juggling…Hope all is well with you.
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Yaah.. me too trying to keep a pace with life.😊
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Bahot khub!!
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Thank you so much ashu. 😊😊💐
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Thats so well written!
I hope you are doing well Gourav ji.😊
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Nandita ji thank you so much for appreciation!! Still trying to cope up, but jo insan paison ke lalchi aur apna naitik aur charitrik patan kar baith te hain unse picha chutna itna asan thode na hota.☺️
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Sahi kaha Gourav ji. But zindagi ka naam hi sangharsh hai. And you know you will emerge out even more stronger! Just deal with patience and have faith in God. And hopefully every thing will be fine…😊
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Bus wahi ek ummid liye hum bhi date pade hain.. let’s see!
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Wow! Or let me say “ye hui na baat” 😃😃
Glad to hear that from you…Don’t worry everything will be fine for sure.! Bas date rahiye.🙂🙂
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Ji shukriya Nandita ji😊😊 koshish to wahi hai bas dar itna sa hi hai ki kahin umra hi na beet jaye.. waqt ka mol😊
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Yep. But jo hota hai ache k liye hi hota hai…Thoda waqt zarur kharab hota hai but experience and seekhne ko kaafi kuch mil jata hai…🙂
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Ji bilkul baat to sahi hai aapki.. umra me kya rakha hai.. dil jawa hona chahiye 😊😊💐
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Beshak!😄
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Khoobsurat..Chai or wo!!😊
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Ji Shukriya 😊😊 abhi to sirf chai hai “WO” ka pata nahi 😊😊
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Wo bhi aayengi..Jald hi
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Ji… 😊😊
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Such a wonderful piece,
A lovely poem out of a simple cup of tea. That’s called the beauty of your writing. Loved it Gourav.
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Thank you so much Moushmi.. and good to hear it from you.
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Superb work
Please follow me and give your suggestions on my poetry:)
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Definitely..!! And thankyou for going through my post!
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Your writings are too good. 💛
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Thank you so much ! Akriti 😊😊💐
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Welcome
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Too good.
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Thank you Rupali..😊😊💐
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Awesomeness
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Hay sir
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Hello bharti 😊💐
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sir m also a blogger ,aapki writings achchi h bahut….
sir ek bar mere blog ko check krke dekhna…
i am new blogger….
akdu15.blogspot.com
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I tried but your site is not opening up..😢
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Bharti I am not on blogspot .. that’s why it was not opening.. how shall I reach then
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Kya baat hai! Perfectly defined and weaved in beautiful lines. Loved it.
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Thank you so much !! I am glad that you loved it..😊😊💐
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Beautiful ! 🙂
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Thank you so much Rashmi 😊😊
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You’re Welcome Gourav! 🙂
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